Loved it after 1:50
So, you're new to Trance I see. Well, what you have created here is very creative if what you are trying to make is Trance. That's a good thing.
I would really work on these couple of things for your next song. First, make a better syncopated pattern for each instrument. That way, the song can have more energy and then release it in the climax. Secondly, there needs to be some sort of chord structure in the song. The only thing that I hear is one note with odd melodies topped to each other.
Overall, there is a hint of talent in this song that just needs more work on in order to shine. Keep practicing and then you'll get there in a matter of years. :P
One more thing: I highly checking out this song by Cressida, it's called Two-O-Ten. Have a listen, and then you would get a better idea of how to structure a Trance song. However, make sure to not lose your creativity while doing so. :)
watch?v=QK6GSAZJqNk
Peace.
~ Luxomni